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𝐉𝐞𝐧𝐧𝐲 𝐁𝐥𝐮𝐞 𝐍𝐨𝐭𝐞𝐬's avatar

Most impressive how you’ve weaved these quotes into a beautifully flowing piece of poetry. And the ending. So perfect for an ending. Really lovely work, Zivah.

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Zivah Avraham's avatar

Thank you so much, Jenny!

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Jill Eng's avatar

I loved this, Zivah. Especially then reading all the quotes you extracted into your poem. Very cool... 😎👌👏

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Zivah Avraham's avatar

Thank you!

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Patrick Eades's avatar

Love what you did with these quotes. Especially the last one about murder.

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Zivah Avraham's avatar

Thank you!

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Debdutta Pal's avatar

Yes, quote magic! I missed them.

My skin feels pretty good though, after reading your words.

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Zivah Avraham's avatar

I’m glad your skin feels good! Thank you 😊

Just off to moisturise…

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Claire Kelly's avatar

I love what you've done with this piece- the quotes at the end, especially the first one. We must stand up and speak.

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Zivah Avraham's avatar

Thank you! I have so many quotes filed away. I’m pretty strict - use them in the order I wrote them down - so it’s a surprise what comes to light poetically.

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Nancy Santos's avatar

I love what you created using these quotes as inspiration.

It’s hard to respect fence riders who refuse to take a stand against the spectrum of injustices around the world.

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Zivah Avraham's avatar

Thank you, and agreed. I have a long, long list of quotes to make use of. The resources are never-ending.

Sitting on the fence means you get splinters up your bum crack.

Well-deserved, I say! 😂

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